Open Poetry #25 |
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Across a Wire.......For Lyra |
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Martie
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Across a Wire She knew me by my poetry and took my hand beyond the veil where we both saw love exhale leaving pieces of heart to mend she knew this art Consigned to gravity I despaired and yearned to be air puffed and blown about would be not tree she asked knowing the way my feet fall into the damp clods skipping altogether the garden path hurry hurrying the latch that opens the meadow where wild iris stake the pattern and straight lines don’t matter She knew this from my poetry she knew it from her heart She was a breeze in air her voice the music of abundance all filled up to splashing laugh gurgled from so many miles across a wire she made me glad even though our link to heart was sad I see her now in heavenly embrace of those not lost but traced within her life I envy her this knowing pleasure that weaves the end of stife into being again together [This message has been edited by Martie (03-20-2003 08:00 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a beautiful write of remember for our dear Lyra. Lovely Martie..perfectly lovely. ~Heart Hugs~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Whispered eloquence that stirs ones spirit so gently. ...reunions among the stars--but in divine time, Dear One.. Love & Light, Linda |
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
martie... you know...I just don't have any words sorry.. everything I try to say just isn't enough |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Beautiful, simply gorgeous. ...and you are closer to this wish-- "Consigned to gravity I despaired and yearned to be air" --than you know. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Martie, this is a work of art and brought another bucket load of tears. I think we are all in shock that our little chipmunk is gone. How we will miss her. She was a breeze in air her voice the music of abundance all filled up to splashing laugh gurgled from so many miles across a wire she made me glad How she loved to chat and she had a giggle that can never be forgotten. Hugs to a special and admired poetress...Marti, with no 'e' Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
She was a breeze in air her voice the music of abundance all filled up to splashing laugh Awwwww Martie, I miss Chipmunk so much, and never even got to meet her. Still I hold her smile in my heart. Thankyou for this. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is so soft, so loving. Only you could write of this, this way. ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, a beautiful poem for our beautiful Lyra. Thank you. ![]() Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Somehow my friend, you put to words for us, emotions that cannot be reckoned. We are blessed. TD |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She knew me by my poetry and took my hand beyond the veil where we both saw love exhale leaving pieces of heart to mend she knew this art ======================== beyond the poetry...and the inspiration found here...are the bonds formed thru our words...thru the parts of ourselves we discover between each others lines...the things we have in common that connect us by verse and rhyme and allow us to reach out and touch one another..many a special friendship has been formed here, the true gift of this home we share across the distances. A poetically lovely tribute to a lovely & held dear woman who touched many of us with her kind heart and her brave spirit. love you girlie ![]() ![]() The Sun The Moon The Stars The Sky |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marti, this is such a beautiful poem for our dear sweet friend, Lyra. I miss her so much. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I love the title you came up with Martie, and again, this couldn't have been a more shining example of your love for others. I will pray for you both, and yes, some day. |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Where there are no words... Yours shine, dear Martie... ![]() |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I knew...when you could, you would, and you did... beautifully... |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() (tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, this too made me cry as I know she will always be the wind now who comforts Mother Nature and shines with Gods grace! (wipes tears) You write of another angelic heart from your angelic heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - you write of love that touches all life here and beyond - such a talent and such wonderful words for a friend - Paul |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Martie, this is so beautiful, and the epitome of pure, poetic inspiration. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I don't have the words Martie.. apart from this is beautiful and so are you and I love you. Maree ![]() |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I still can't express how I feel--she was such a comfort to me after my father passed--sought me out she did, and just kept knocking at my walls through poetry and e mails...I'm still amazed. and it's always with tears that I know I can never re-pay her. I'm grateful to read the gracious words of everyone, saying it so much more eloquently than I. *thank you* Martie. I think you understand me as well as anyone can. ![]() |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I see her now in heavenly embrace of those not lost but traced within her life I envy her this knowing pleasure that weaves the end of stife into being again together I couldn't pick a favorite tribute to Lyra, whom I did not know well, but you've written with love and honesty. I think your closing lines above say as clearly and closely as any what we all wish for when it is our turn. This is very lovely. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
We all loved her so much, didn't we, Martie? She was a very caring, strong and compationate woman. I'll dearly miss her. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
She knew me by my poetry and took my hand beyond the veil where we both saw love exhale leaving pieces of heart to mend she knew this art Oh Martie~ No doubt she knew this too. In her wisdom she went beyond poetry and touched the heart. As you have done so eloquently. I miss her so, thank you Martie~ |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Martie, so touching and well said. Hugs Sandra |
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