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A New Me |
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ShaolinsOnlyPoet Junior Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 31Brooklyn, New York |
My life revolved around what others had to say My goal was to please everyone each and everyday Untill one day I found my road to success I started living for me, not caring about the rest My priorities changed , my goals set higher And as my life became better their eyes set on fire They did what they could to bring my life down But as I walked that road to success I swore never again would I drown In that sea of jealous eyes that wished for me to fail I just looked up, walked on, and showed them I would prevail |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Walk on! But wait, not until your Welcomed! to Passions! My goodness, but I think you're going to like it here! Please check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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ShaolinsOnlyPoet Junior Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 31Brooklyn, New York |
Thank you for responding and for your welcome, i think im gonna like it here too. ~~::~Candii~::~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Candii, this is such a wonderful debut, sweet friend, true happiness begins with YOU, never ever forget that as you are a very special person with a true heart, yay, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Candii, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Candii, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Being yourself despite what others have to say is always the best. *s [This message has been edited by Chanson (02-19-2003 01:57 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Welcome, I hope you like it here, I sure like your work. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This shows us we can do anything. I like it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Depending on war....I hope to go to your "Poetry" home this September for the Zhengzhou Wushu Festival.....will you be reciting or fighting there?...LOL...Great write...and, don't know where you got your name from....but I am planning on visiting the "Temple" and being part of the festival, unless Iraq and Korea prohibit...... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed your poem and look forward to reading more of your work..... By the way......  Ethel....garysgirl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... welcome to Passions! |
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Shlee Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 72USA |
Very nice  Being yourself is always so much easier than trying to live the way others want you to. It is a very free feeling. Enjoyed, Shlee |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome! How wonderful that you prevailed!--and now you have found yourself a new home--Passions in Poetry! Such an uplifting write. I wish I had learned that lesson earlier in my life! Warm welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow! That is one powerful poem and filled with sheer determination that I so admire. You sure get my vote. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Fauxreal Junior Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 38 |
Great job- very inspirational. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Good one... please feel welcome to this place... regards, sudhir |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Good Attitude ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Very nicely done. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Wow! Can I relate to this poem tonight. Thanks for writing it and sharing it. Welcome to Passions |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Candii, this is a wonderful poem of strength and determination to BE...the individual you were born to be. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
welcome..hope you always have an abundance of such attitude... |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This poem is so special I just had to come back to put it in my library |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I get a kick out of this...again I say it's awesome! |
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