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Open Poetry #25

Surrender (rictameter)

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
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0 posted 2003-03-19 11:25 PM

I just read a rictameter done by bsquirrel... I forgot why I liked them until now.. so I gave it a shot.. be nice.. it's been awhile LOL

Surrender

You… here
Fill my senses
Life seems so far away
When the essence of you fills me
You become my weakness
Capture my soul
My heart.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2003-03-19 11:36 PM

wow it is soooooo good to see you back posting.....this is such a lovely picture....I can only imagen the inspiration behind it....

I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light
You come to me out of my dreams
Across the night

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-03-19 11:46 PM

This is beautiful....
so romantic...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
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3 posted 2003-03-20 11:37 AM

Thanks Lauren and garysgirl... I do appreciate you two stopping in

I am trying to reconnect with my muse... it's not as easy as it sounds LOL.

"wake me up inside
call my name and save me from the dark"
-Bring Me To Life by Evanescence

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-03-21 04:46 AM

Very nice...James

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