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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2003-03-19 11:25 PM



I just read a rictameter done by bsquirrel... I forgot why I liked them until now.. so I gave it a shot.. be nice.. it's been awhile LOL




Surrender

You… here
Fill my senses
Life seems so far away
When the essence of you fills me
You become my weakness
Capture my soul
My heart.

© Copyright 2003 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-19 11:36 PM


wow it is soooooo good to see you back posting.....this is such a lovely picture....I can only imagen the inspiration behind it....


L~

I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light
You come to me out of my dreams
Across the night

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2 posted 2003-03-19 11:46 PM


This is beautiful....
so romantic...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

rosepetals25
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3 posted 2003-03-20 11:37 AM


Thanks Lauren and garysgirl... I do appreciate you two stopping in   I am trying to reconnect with my muse...  it's not as easy as it sounds LOL.

"wake me up inside
call my name and save me from the dark"
-Bring Me To Life by Evanescence

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4 posted 2003-03-21 04:46 AM


Very nice...James
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