Open Poetry #25 |
some days |
Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Love has been within my grasp and faltered. I try not to dwell on it but it taunts me some days with words like fool and dream and why and mostly… I don’t argue. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Duncan goodness - isnt that hard though? The not arguing part - hmmmm . . . I know this well - nice job xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
.....and that is the most difficult decision to make! (big hugggsssssss) I send angel healing hugs your way, dearest friend, we all can relate to this I'm sure, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
I try not to dwell on it but it taunts me some days with words like fool and dream and why and mostly… I don’t argue ******************* Some of the best words I've seen today. Outstanding job, Duncan Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful, yet sad, Duncan. You put words together perfectly. Thanks for sharing. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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TaureauRouge Junior Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 26A mass of land between two oceans |
I liked the control in your post. I've had a few of these days, and I know how easy it is to fill pages and pages with a rant. Good job "I should have been a pair of ragged claws/ Scuttling over the floors of silent seas"-T.S. Eliot |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's pointless to argue the argument... while trying to make sense of our dreams. I hear you Mister~ smile now, just because... it can't hurt. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this! very well done! it just touched me, maybe because I can relate so well |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I know this feeling very well. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
with words like fool and dream and why and mostly… I don’t argue. ============================ mothy motto # 2: why ask why baby............... tis just is. "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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