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loneliness squared
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loneliness squared |
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noah j Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 82on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair |
a small gift-- often overlooked for she may have been wrapped in newspaper-- sloppily and quickly wrapped-- not the shiny, metallic flashy colors topped with many a bow-- perfect wrapping job-- that i was looking for i put it aside on the table to play with my expensive toys they all broke--me or walked away i never cut it open never cared now we are loneliness squared. the only people for me are the mad ones-mad to live, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at once--jack kerouac |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
perfect wrapping job-- that i was looking for i put it aside on the table to play with my expensive toys they all broke--me Very poignant. Enjoyed the write of this. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, there's a lot of hidden truth in this one. I really liked it..  "Love makes the world go around" |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write is all I can think of to say. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Noah - one day you will have the opportunity again . . . to open that silken wrapped present and look to it with pride = xxoo |
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