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Love Complete?
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Love Complete? |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Love complete? Does love come as a whole or part? Can we perhaps divide our heart? Although we stay in love complete And really don’t have wandrin’ feet, How can one sense that surge of care That clutches breath and curls hair? And draws one as a siren’s song? And lures me to the one I long? No doubt have I as to my course; I’m not a man who’s crude or coarse. No steps take I to soothe this dream, But tuck her charm away and beam. I hug quite close the one I know and listen to ”I love you so.” I snuggle in without regret and know my life is safe…and yet? Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This a wonderful poem. I love it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Kayjay, this a lovely poem always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
To Loner and Carol: Thank you for your kind comments. Love stories are so much fun to tell. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
....and yet?  Smiling up at you Ken... This is lovely....very lovely and much enjoyed. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Ken, I understand this feeling of curiosity too, sweet friend, I thought my sweetheart really did love me but she didn't really and now I'm alone again and now I have no choice but to establish new rules in accepting love to my heart! (sad sigh) This is very touching, sweet friend, we all love you nso much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ken, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-17-2003 08:01 PM).] |
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Shlee Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 72USA |
Very nice. You have asked some very interesting questions. Quite thought provoking. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
To the ever lovely E, and the Angel, also Shlee in these lines of gratitude I applaud your aptitude!! Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful, Ken.... and not just because I'm a hopeless romantic that loves all these love poems, either....LOL...  . . .(If you had submitted this to the book, I would cerainly have voted for it, friend) . Ethel |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
makes you think doesn't it?? I ahve some questions of my own  Simply beautiful!! I like love stories......... |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
To Ethel and Albert, I offer a rhyme Please let me tell stories one love at a time And we will all hearken and bow with head low to marvel how words can just thrill our hearts so. Thank you both very kindly. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and yet I chance the course of dream it takes me to ride on moonlight's beam where schemes of times be mine in whole and two as one will walk the shoals... oh to think that I might converse with a love and a life, now rehearsed, for in my mind I've chanced to know the one that holds my heart in glow... ~*~ KayJay...thanks for the inspiration...  |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
There is such a flow to your words, Karilea, you are a skilled and practiced writer. Thanks for your note. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what an ending! |
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