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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2003-03-19 09:11 PM


A year has gone by since I last heard your voice
You had to leave, you made your choice
I remember you saying over and over "I don't want you to doubt my love for you."I had to scream at you to get you to stop saying that
I never cried so hard that day,I wish you never went away
I tried calling you and I know that you know
Sometimes I lay on my bed and silently pray for strength but it only brings me tears
I wish I could turn back the hands of time and go back to last year

For Lana-who will forever be in my heart.

[This message has been edited by ParisGrl (03-19-2003 09:21 PM).]

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WhiteRose
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1 posted 2003-03-19 09:15 PM


A beautiful and loving poem.
Salt
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since 2003-03-19
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2 posted 2003-03-19 09:19 PM


Nice Emotion! I can tell you really have feelings toward this subject.

Peace

ParisGrl
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3 posted 2003-03-19 09:21 PM


WhiteRose,

Thank you for your reply.  

Salt,

Welcome to Passions!  I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.

~Laura~

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