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Our Story |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
There is a mystery whispered timeless through the breeze, Aahhhh...you are the breeze and I - I am the secret carried by your winds. And birds sing graceful to the air, Huuuuu...you are their muse, And I - Voiceless...take flight within your song. There is a story lost within your eyes, Aahhhh...I listen as a thousand untold tales speak silent as a tear. This is our story. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is simply beautiful. Truly a lovely write. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
and what a beautiful story it is Ericc - always touching me with your words - so sweet - what a lucky lady - this is lovely xxoo |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
What a breathtaking story of beautiful, incredible love... from an amazing, loving heart. Thank you so much for sharing such beauty, once again... you are my most favorite poet. Love, Moca |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
omg you write so exquisitely..... Voiceless...take flight within your song. Did you hear that sigh? I'm claiming it LOL the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are a hopeless, endless, romantic... thank goodness! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, and know the story never ends and many chapters are bound to be written in gold from here on! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, from one hopeless romantic to another....I love this!! "Love makes the world go around" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
…. “silent as a tear” …. And still you hear! “Our story” touches the core of my heart….. oh …. you made it sing! You are THE POET OF LOVE! Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
OMG, this is sooooo beautifully written... Peace & Light, Earth Angel |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
That is amazing. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the way you write gal!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
huuuuu .... The muse loves you! ...achingly beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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LegalSecret69 Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 69Virginia |
This was very different...and amazing. To me, it had alot of different meanings.... LegalSecret69 |
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