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Silver_Tryst
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0 posted 2003-03-19 04:06 PM



Long and Luscious
Burning fire
Slow and slick
Sweet desire

Love and passion
In depths within
Light and flicker
A seductive sin

© Copyright 2003 Shayne Kenichi - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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1 posted 2003-03-19 04:35 PM


This is a sweet and sensual write. Enjoyed
Little_One
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2 posted 2003-03-19 09:33 PM


You got down to the point...and I like it

Kristin

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3 posted 2003-03-19 09:35 PM


Yes, a very sensual write!!
I liked it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

Rdz9
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4 posted 2003-03-19 11:40 PM


Bad thoughts, GOOD write.
littlewing
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5 posted 2003-03-20 01:45 AM


Shayne - this is awesome - lol - perfect - very nice write . . . xxoo
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