»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #25
»
On the back row
| Open Poetry #25 |
|
On the back row |
|
|
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
|
He thrives upon the bite appreciates the bark of life beckons the pain deeper if only to teach him it might as well Filters his thoughts and dismisses clear water wrenches his bruises through too a deeper blue he takes the colour well Hand in hand mockery with acceptance of the false after all its them not him he sees the act applauded and throws his thorns. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
||
| © Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Brilliant gemma as always.. |
||
|
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Your words are always so intensly felt. Eric |
||
|
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gemma - God you just know how to make words sing dont you? Loved this and this here: He thrives upon the bite appreciates the bark of life nice line - xxoo |
||
|
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
A vision where upon the bark is sometimes worse than the bite .... excellently depicted, gemma great work |
||
garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Gemma,  Another very interesting poem. I really like your poetry, girl.  By the way, a really pretty picture and a very pretty smile. Heart Hugs to you  Ethel Mae |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
