Surreal Gestures of indulgence

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Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-03-19 02:51 PM

                Masterfully
                   I die
                   Spitting chocolate
                   dipped
                   maggots
                   into rancid chicken soup
                   sexually gesturing
                   at picture of Betty Grabel
                   on the Bathroom wall
                   I lie
                   lie on
                   in and out
                   Running backwards
                   naked
                   wearing an old codpiece
                   covered in mold
                   falling
                   down
                   down
                   down
                   the broken spiral
                   staircase
                   stopping only for Brandy
                   and Wicked Ale
                   and so to door bell ring
                   I spring
                   to my mistress
                   sacred vixen
                   of naughtiness
                   and half baked sex pies
                   lie down!
                   lie in !
                   out!
                   Slashing off ugly toes
                   and I begin yet
                   my Journey to eternal bliss
                   in Mcdonald land
                   paying to see st ronald
                   take off his nose.
                   -forgive me mcheese-
                   for I have sinned
                   falling to sleep
                   in a puddle of grease

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-03-19 02:57 PM

God you are brilliant! My downfall is chocolate myself - this is - you just keep blowing my mind xxoo

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-03-19 02:57 PM

Brad I think your work is brilliant and I'm not just saying this because of your reply to mine. I discuss your work with others and apologize if I haven't replied as often as I'd like to. Your work demands attention and emotion. This piece is absoluteley jarring, reminds me the movie Se7en and Fight Club both brilliant and misunderstood.

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-19-2003 02:57 PM).]

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-03-19 03:04 PM

why thank you

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-03-19 03:14 PM

Title and poem go hand in hand! Off-beat but on center!

Peace & Light,
Earth Angel

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-03-24 02:34 PM

How did I miss this before? Most excellent, oh excellent one.

Susan

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2003-03-24 03:34 PM

most excellant one! Good for the ego you are

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