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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
A dream Storming Inside a tear Ready to open The flood gates Saline solution Caustic needs Mind melt Eroding desires Pure images Tranquil landscape Inspiringly peaceful Assuring tranquility Miracle visions Escaping depression Softness so tender Being cuddled Forever Special caress Simple pleasures Silken thoughts So divinely Spontaneous Dreaming In realities Smile Drizzling warmth Sweet raindrops Releasing frustrations Drowning doubt Revealing blossoms Spring cleansing Rainbow thoughts Floating spirit Ugly duckling Transformed Dynamically refreshed Free to roam Unhindered skies D.Lester Young 2/17/2003 Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) [This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (02-17-2003 05:37 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write... Now being 'cuddled forever' is very inviting. Much enjoyed the read. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Thank you Enchantress hearing from you is always a special blessing. Thank you the_loner_23 for you always lift my spirit in the hope that my words will fly free. I thank you all for your support for my struggle continuous in the doubts of my own mind. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Dave, I abolutely love this. Too many lines to quote. I like the sense of meditation...where often, I too, can get relief from emotional pain and fear, etc. It ended very well. Truly a good write and I don't know how I missed it earlier. Enjoyed greatly, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Beautiful, wonderful and...everything good!!  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I have read many of your works, each enjoyable in its own right. This had a pleasing sensation that lifted the reader. Nice job. ThisDiamond |
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