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meek scorpion New Member
since 2003-03-12
Posts 9margaritaville |
Adrift . . . sailing a sea of broken dreams dark side of my soul destined for self destruction Abandoned . . . guilt consuming this shattered heart begging for comfort restoration a sign that you still care that you love me that I am not alone is this my punishment ....you mock me with silence [This message has been edited by meek scorpion (03-19-2003 03:14 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
meek - Welcome to PIP! God - this is amazing - awesome first post especially here: ....you mock me with silence ahhh we all feel that way - dont we sometimes? Your ship will sail again . . . You will love it here - many wonderful people and beautiful writing xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-19-2003 03:18 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice...I can relate well. Welcome to Passions  |
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meek scorpion New Member
since 2003-03-12
Posts 9margaritaville |
my ship has caught winds of love & restoration never b4 dreamed - the poem is called pt 1 because she is part 2 - then He gave me..... you thank-you for the wonderful welcome littlewing & passing shadows |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
sorry had to come back to comment on the Part II - is just beautiful - made me smile twice - xxoo |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
This is a great post, looking forward to reading more.Welcome. Jason |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
~Welcome to Passions~ Enjoyed this greatly and look forward to more of your poetry. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! An excellent first post! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Meek Scorpion,  I enjoyed your first post and look forward to reading more of your work. BTW, I'm glad that there's a "Part 2" for you and yours. Heart Hugs, Ethel.....garysgirl [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-19-2003 11:01 AM).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to Passion, hope to read many more Charisma |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Zowie! That was goooood! Great first post! Welcome to Passions! You are off to a great start! Warm welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
As if you read my own heart.....I very much enjoyed this poem!!!! Hope to read more from you!!!!!! WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Silence can truly be petrifying, sweet friend, this is a powerful debut and I hope a message comes to you and a certain answer, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  : May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Very nicely done, enjoyed the read of this.  |
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meek scorpion New Member
since 2003-03-12
Posts 9margaritaville |
sorry - I was called out of town before recieving your wonderful responses, just got back. littlewing - I love making you smile jason - pat - & sunshine thank you garysgirl - ty & cute emoticon charisma & earth angel - thank you bridgette - thank you too noah - your sincere words are so special ty whiterose - thank you as well To all of you thank you so very much for your kind welcome. I'm honored that you all read & responded to my writing. In the future I will try to respond to your replies more quickly. Thank you again meek scorpion - Michael |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You gotta let it go [This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-20-2003 10:35 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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