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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
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Austin, Tx
0 posted 2003-02-17 04:04 PM

Oh whisper
So silent
Bidding its time
To be heard

Silence
So deafening
A void
In a vacuum

Nothing
Blackness
So intense
Exploding

A light
So intense
It breathes
From sounds
So loud
Everyone hears

D.Lester Young 2/17/2003
Tuscaloosa, AL
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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-17 04:05 PM

I like the way you explained your feelings. It was wonderful. Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart
cinnamongirl
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since 2003-02-02
Posts 217
2 posted 2003-02-17 04:34 PM

Wow... this is a lovely poem.

Thanks so much for sharing your gentle, magic words.

Love,
Moca
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2003-02-17 05:20 PM

D.Lester  
An interesting write, enjoyed.
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178
4 posted 2003-02-17 08:09 PM

Very intense...I liked it.
Thanks,
Eric
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