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From Moment To Every Following Moment
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From Moment To Every Following Moment |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I am surrounded by the grace of your touch - The first light of dawn is a slow rising caress...my eyes opening to dreams of only you. I bathe in the heat of your kiss, full of the passions of a thousand midday suns. The evening’s early breeze pulls me to the rhythm of your breath - And I rise with you as the moon, filled with the night’s desires. I am surrounded by the grace of your touch - From Moment to every following moment. |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Aaahhh... such beautiful imagery and sweet emotion, caressing the reader with every delicate, powerful word. This takes me to wonderful, peaceful places within the Spirit. Thank you... Love, Moca |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
some day I hope to feel that way again... *s ~A~ |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
I would have to agree with Alice... I barely dare to hope for this feeling again. Indeed you are well blessed with love. ~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one... |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
Sweet love, sweet words, as a gentle spring breeze... Beautiful! Love, Etain. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...how beautiful! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
So beautiful, Eric. I think you're becoming one of us hopeless romantics at PIP,(LOL) and I love reading your poems, too. Keep writing and we'll keep reading...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
agreeing with ethel, can always rely on you for a good old sensual, romantic read. Good on you ericc, keep em coming!  learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I bathe in the heat of your kiss, full of the passions of a thousand midday suns. *sigh* Lovely words. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As fresh and promising as the breath of a spring's night sweet air... Peace & Light, Earth Angel |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ahh .... what a wonderful chain of blissful moments ... grace and beauty harmoniously and magically melt and flow ..... expanding from moment to moment ... to no end. Love, Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh Eric, This was so delicate upon the tongue...like meringe. Absolutely beautiful. TD |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice poem  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, and may each passing moment bring you great joy and smiles! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is mesmerizing, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ericc - thats it - no more clicking you on lol - such beautiful words - good for you xxoo |
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