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Kethry
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0 posted 2003-03-17 03:02 PM


*This is a little series Sven and I worked on some time ago when my free versed was a little more caged. I am hoping to tempt him to come out to play.
Kethry


Dusk to dawn I wait
now to rest, the torch I offer
to my brother sun
who brings the morning light

I, his sister moon
have cooled the light for him
lit it up with stars
and filled it with romance


True light is now required
not mere reflection of his grace
the clouds await his welcome touch
shine on brother sun

New dawning of the day
I go now to my rest
await his bright and joyous day
to light my face once more


and when the night must come
as surely follows day
sister moon is there
to soften and to play.




Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


[This message has been edited by Kethry (03-17-2003 03:06 PM).]

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...and vice versa! (big hugggssssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, opposites can attract as long as everything as contingent and when the sun and moon are married, we have the reason to believe! I sure hope Sven comes out to play on this, I have missed him immensely on the boards, I'm stomping my feet like fans at a stadium to see him soar in here, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton













"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2003-03-17 03:53 PM


Kethry
A lovely piece of work, enjoyed.

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3 posted 2003-03-17 04:02 PM



"Sister Moon Greets the Sun"--you had me from the get go!

Warm hugs,
EA

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4 posted 2003-03-17 10:02 PM


hello again Sister Moon. . . I remember this series well. . . it may be just the inspiration that I need. . .

well done my friend. . .

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5 posted 2003-03-18 10:07 AM


This is a wonderful duet... and a very successful one, it seems! LOL

I enjoyed very much! *S*

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6 posted 2003-03-18 10:09 AM


A charming duet indeed!! Could we have some more please? Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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