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littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

0 posted 2003-03-17 11:38 AM

Cloudburst
thunder
thoughts asunder

falling upon my face
A kiss from Heaven

mingled with
one
lone
tear
escaping
these eyes of mine

They once did smile

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-17-2003 11:41 AM).]

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-03-17 11:41 AM

Small but mighty! Very effective in creating the visuals and the mood.

~ Remember, sunny days are coming!

Warm hugs,
EA

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-03-17 11:45 AM

This aches but it's so beautiful

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

3 posted 2003-03-17 11:50 AM

I like this alot.
Jason

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-03-17 01:48 PM

Earth - hey - you wished the sun here didnt you? It is shining so bright now . . .

Raph - thank you sweety - I have no idea what brought this one on - just pictured a rainfall . . .

Jason - thank you so much

xxoo

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Little_One
Junior Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 34
montana

5 posted 2003-03-17 04:16 PM

Hey little wings, I loved the poem....I will be looking for you just as you will be looking for me.

My eyes have seen the cries
My eyes have seen the tears
But my heart will be there untill the end
To help calm all your fears

Kristin

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-03-17 04:30 PM

Kristen - thank you . . . xxoo

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-03-17 11:02 PM

cry in the rain,
weep with the clouds,
true love existing
behind the moons shrouds

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-03-17 11:15 PM

Very very lovely...much enjoyed this tonight.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Silver_Tryst
Member

since 2003-03-10

Posts 64
MT

9 posted 2003-03-17 11:43 PM

Littlewing, what can i say, another beautiful write

Shayne

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2003-03-18 12:13 PM

Sue, this is beautiful, but sad. I hope that your eyes smile again very soon.

Hugs,
Ethel

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

11 posted 2003-03-18 01:00 AM

Michele - what a beautiful response TY so much

Nancy Shayne & Ethel - you guys are much to good to me xxoo thank you truly

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2003-03-18 03:50 AM

I like this kind of writing...very good

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

13 posted 2003-03-18 01:45 PM

thanks shadows - hehehe can always count on you xxoo

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

14 posted 2003-03-18 03:33 PM

Oh wow...this is so bitter sweet.
Lovely writing.
Eric

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

15 posted 2003-03-18 03:47 PM

nice tight writing... and the mix of nature and emotion well done..

I enjoyed

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

16 posted 2003-03-18 04:22 PM

Very nice...James

j0n4th4n
Member

since 2003-03-11

Posts 94

17 posted 2003-03-18 04:27 PM

an exiting poem!

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

18 posted 2003-03-18 06:02 PM

This is a little gem of a poem
with a bright shine.
I like I like. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

19 posted 2003-03-18 06:34 PM

wonderful.....sigh.....wonderful.....love this

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

20 posted 2003-03-18 07:42 PM

Ericc - thanks so much - bittersweet yes . . .

C- glad you enjoyed - yes trying to keep them tight

James - thank you

Jon - means a lot - TY

Dorene - I like I like your response TY

jelly - thank you so much - ahhh sigh yess perfect

xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-18-2003 07:42 PM).]

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