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Surek
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since 2003-03-17
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0 posted 2003-03-18 06:38 PM


                (I am)

I sit here and question my very existence,
Full of self-doubt wondering what must be wrong with me?
Is it my eyes, perhaps it’s the fact I don’t smile.
Maybe it’s the way I sound? Unsure of what it could be,
I see and hear everyone around me. Curious as to why I even bother.
I thought I played the game right, Bought the flowers wrote the poems,
Even a love letter or two. Yet I have failed in what I desire.
I thought I asked the right questions, listened to the answers.
Still confused as to why no one even bothers.


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Etain
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since 2003-02-22
Posts 92
The moon...
1 posted 2003-03-18 08:42 PM


Along the path answers
will arrive alone,
even withouth ask.
I enjoyed your words,
Greetings and smiles,
Etain.

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2003-03-18 08:58 PM


Welcome to Passions. We all ask ourselves the same questions. We all fit where we fit. That's life. Nicely done
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