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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-03-16 11:10 PM


Tonight I feel blue
But nobody knows
That I do

I keep my feelings inside
For nobody wants to listen
Any old way

I feel like I can cry
But the tears
Never come

I wish somebody would listen
But it always
Comes in one ear
And out the other

I am nothing
But blue

Cold hands means a warm heart

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-03-16 11:12 PM


Julie - felt this one - as do we all -nothing but blue  . . .  BUT sometimes just sometimes that blue can be the blue of the sky - the blue of a bird or the blue as calm as a summer stream . . . I feel like this too - waiting for the color to change xxoo  
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-03-16 11:18 PM


Sometimes people do hear, it's just
that they're unsure of what to say.
And it's been my experience that I
either talk too much or over react.
Blue on blue is what it is.

Smile Julie~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-16-2003 11:19 PM).]

garysgirl
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Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
3 posted 2003-03-16 11:24 PM


Julie, I've known the feeling when all
you want is for someone to understand...
and to listen, even when you don't speak a
word.

Heart Hugs, Julie
Ethel

ThunderMage
Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
4 posted 2003-03-16 11:27 PM


I wish I could be there to hug you Julie. Then you'd be smiling, and I love your smile.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

lost_star
Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114
NY, U.S.A
5 posted 2003-03-16 11:30 PM


Great poem, just remember, even it you don't always here, people are always out there pulling for you!
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2003-03-17 03:09 AM


hugs to you
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