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Dancing Near The Bayou
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Dancing Near The Bayou |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“DANCING NEAR THE BAYOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ This mysterious place down near the bayou, reminds me of a place of different seeds, blues sing from the swamp, driving my soul, a melody captures, as that guitar bleeds… Underneath the cypress, sexy as a dream, eyes meet mine piercing deep into my flesh, a hand I extend to propose into lights dawn, two comes closer touching, wanting to mesh… Hair flows down to meet shoulders length, fingers run through silk, as senses awake, hips sway with each other’s magic touch, my being is senseless inside with her ache… Once more I meet the one of many brews, a witch of the cypress swamp to dance, mystifying will be this night knowing her, as she hypnotizes me into desires trance… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Another gem Bill, I really enjoyed the read.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling at this poem and giggling at Noah's reply as well. Creepy, huh? Well it's okay, I've said it before and I say it again-- "Sometimes I give myself the creeps." --Green Day (I never said I said it first!  )Bill you have an innate understanding of my part of the world, made all the more beautiful through your dreamy and romantic verse. I keep meaning to take pictures, but then, the way your write it? I don't have to. I thank you for this.  |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
great write. I thoroughly enjoyed this one. ~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
kind of earthy and real romantic, nice touch, bill |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Dancin' near 'da bayou, The twist and mashed 'pataters, Ya can't quite do the two step, If one leg's bit off by gators. nice write my guitar pickin' pal... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Much enjoyed Bill! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, loved your poem, as always. This one has an extra little thought-provoking kick to it... Making the reader think of the bayou and everything around it....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a romantic picture you've captured... reminds me of my days in New Iberia. *S* I like this very much, Bill! *S* Of course, I'm ROFL @ Toe's two steppin' with one leg! LOL Don't wade in the swamps! *G* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Loving in mysterious places can be so intoxicating... Warm, springtime hugs, EA |
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