Open Poetry #25 |
Heart To Heart |
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
art by Sunny I think we need to have a little heart to heart Remember how we used to talk all night? Some things have come between us and we need to start Recapturing the times that felt so right... You know how much I love you, and you feel the same But sometimes daily problems dim the glow When angry words are spoken it ignites a flame And hurtful words just make the distance grow... In the light of day we feel as strangers do And neither one of us think we were wrong But sometimes love has ups and downs, (more than a few) Still, in our hearts we know that we belong... So, come on over here, and share some time with me Just sit right down and look into my eyes We'll have a heart to heart over a cup of tea And maybe then we both will realize... That every couple needs their little heart to hearts To help them keep communication strong It's simple, just a smile can be the place to start To feel the love that's been there all along... Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (03-16-2003 06:31 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Beautiful. A treasure for the eyes, and heart. [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (03-16-2003 09:19 PM).] |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Words of wisdom that I could have used many moons ago. Perhaps, with your reminder on here, I shall never forget again. One for the book...if you were to choose. ~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can relate well to this...you wrote it just perfectly! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A smile is a good way to open the door...James |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny - you certainly came right to the point. Without good communications, you can wrap it up and throw it away. Great job - i really enjoy and appreciate your poems. |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
could work easily as an rb& love song nice. -majnu |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."but sometimes daily problems dim the glow"--so true, that is why we all need to have a lot of fans by the fire to keep it burning! A beautiful and meaningful write. ---and your artwork was the perfect accompaniment to your words! Springtime hugs, EA |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, a voice of reason, which seems to be so much more frequent from the woman..I like this, and the hearts made a perfect picture to go with. Sandra |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
It's like you are speaking for me. Sooo well said, Sunnyone! When you think you have heard it all, |
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