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Loves Touch {duet with Bill Charles}
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Loves Touch {duet with Bill Charles} |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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~Loves Touch~ Duet by Bill Charles & Gentle Spirit ~~~~ When I was young I believed love would touch me in ways I only dreamed of, but then we met, and my eyes beheld your beauty. My heart skipped a beat from the feelings offered new and my soul has become lost in the sharing love of two. I have felt you in my heart, as you taught me tenderness, passions delights, and more than I've ever dreamed about. I have grown to learn that love is more than just a mere emotion but even more, it’s a treasured moment remaining forever, in cherished hold. This I now know, for you have touched me with you. ~~~~ I must have had my momma's will and Gods Amazing Grace... I'm a survivor.... (Reba) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-17-2003 08:46 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A sweet and tender duet that brought a smile to my face this morning... and grinning wide now, I'm a survivor too!  Nice work you two! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Donna & Bill - truly a testament to love - what a beautiful afternoon surprise - thank you this is amazing xxoo |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very, very beautiful, Donna and Bill. I love it......  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
~SIGH..... Need I say More??? |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lovely, Lovely.....amazing how love can touch, in so many different emotions....  hugssssssLauren~ Here I am |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Donna and Bill... A most beautiful duet... You thoughts and ink blend so well together.. Thank you for this keeper! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Donna - you're a very special lady, thank you so much... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Emotions are fleeting! I think it is the longevity that comes with time and harbors patience and understanding that endures in the end. Nice duetting you two~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 very nice! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all so very much for enjoying our little "duet" and Bill you are a true gentleman and fantastic writer. Thank you for the time and patience it took in writing this piece. Peace to poetry land and hugggsss Donna |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How cool is this??? Two of my favorite authors, lighting my favorite topic in pastel and candle light. Wonderful read. ThisDiamond |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So wonderful to see two compassionate and sharing poets collaborate on such a duet.... Wonderful!  Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...[This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-23-2003 07:46 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A duet by two of my former collaborators! This is a special treat for me! Simply superb! L-o-v-e-r-l-y... Warm hugs and angel kisses to two fine poets! Linda |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
A round of applause to the duet duo! Lovely! When you think you have heard it all, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
lovely duet, softly woven. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very,very nice you two!! Congrats on a charming duet!! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Again my thanks to everyone for the wonderful comments and to Bill for making it great. Peace Ya'll! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Donna, I just noticed that this is a book submission now...so here's my vote...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 ***Bumping so I can now vote too!*** Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Donna & Bill Enjoyed very much. The two of you are like peas in a pod. Thanks for sharing...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
how beautiful penned, enjoyed this lovely duet from 2 wonderful poets very much Charisma |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Many thanks to everyone for the wonderful replies and for taking time to read. Peace and hugs to all....... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-19-2003 01:20 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A lovely duet. You both get my vote.  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna and Bill...A beautiful duet! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is a beautiful collaboration. *S* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Donna - you romantic you, lovely... Thank you all for your truly great replies... BC |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You two make beautiful music together. Sandra |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A lovely romantic interlude...  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very Beautiful.....Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
An excellent poetic pairing! Being a romantic, well... Voting now. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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angsana Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 77 |
Splendidly written!! angsana |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wow, thank you all so very very much! Hugs and Peace to poetry land!! |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
A duet for the ages ~ sighing as I read these lovely words ~ Bonnie |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your verses flow very sweetly and harmoniously to form a whole, which is very very lovely. Much enjoyed. Love, Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a lovely poem Donna..isn't Bill easy to write with? hugss M hope you are well |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I think this was completely awesome you two. great job! If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
We should be able to vote twice for this, one vote for each of you. Oh well! Once will have to do it. Lovely indeed. |
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morefiah Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 150Spanish Town, Jamaica |
Absolutely beautiful.... Thank you both |
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morefiah Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 150Spanish Town, Jamaica |
Breathtakingly beautiful.... Thank you both... I was trying to edit but something went wrong so I ended up posting again... No problem... I got to add an adjective. LOL [This message has been edited by morefiah (04-08-2003 01:37 PM).] |
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