Open Poetry #25 |
a pair while "off the deep end" |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Not España nor Lasagne al dente con penne arivaderci mi compañé you stole my noodle gave to your poodle too very rudle so ciao for now! ©March 16, 2003 Animal Husbandry the kitten with the mitten was smitten by Romeo the puppy with the guppy just a yuppy on cups o’ Jo the birdie in the dirty very flirty with Sally Jay he’s gone a courtin’ with what he’s sportin’ for a roll up in the hay it must be spring I hear the ring of love all around it seems that all of God’s creation has the world upside down ©March 16, 2003 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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ngoliant Junior Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 20Eastof theSun&WestoftheMoon |
Neatly "sprung"! And I like "rudle" and intend to use it as a noun. [This message has been edited by ngoliant (03-17-2003 02:32 PM).] |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
This has the unique feel of existentialism! Love it! When you think you have heard it all, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Virginia, I love this! "Love makes the world go around" |
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