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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Thinking here about you, thinking sometimes makes us blue. Remembering the memories the trials the joy, playing with them, as a favorite old toy. As if thinking of them could bring them back, the summers your lakeside shack. Together there, alone in the world, with only the memories left to swirl about us in the mist, our friendship, our tryst. Thinking reminds me of your eyes, the way they shimmered as we cried, of friendship found anewm staring away in water blue. Together there the memory lasts, although it is only past. |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Welcome to Passions... Thias is a really decent write... maybe if you separated by lines??? Just my opinion. ~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Rd - Yes Welcome - I agree - is most beautiful words here - seperate them and you will have an entirely diff perspective . . . xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good start welcome to Passions |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Your poetry saddens me....you write your feelings very well!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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