Open Poetry #25 |
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Rosebud's Blues |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada ![]() |
In a little pink room I found her Sitting in a light green easy chair in a rest home called Oak Manor her eyes held an empty stare I spoke softly breaking the silence "I'm pleased to meet you Ella Rose." but she knew I'd be arrivin she looked straight at me and spoke Chorus: "Never new I had a grandson, These days I thought, it's over waitin for the final call to come waitin to whisper from the clover If you've come to hear my say come closer, I'll tell it to you I'm a faded Rose with a yesterday Let me tell you bout Rosebud's blues" Said her Momma'd named her Rosebud for her country singing career but she'd passed on, dreams undone and then my Grandpa appeared A girl all alone in Nashville can fall in love to save her soul but he left her with unpaid bills and a son to raise all alone Chorus: "Never new I had a grandson, These days I thought, it's over waitin for the final call to come waitin to whisper from the clover If you've come to hear my say come closer, I'll tell it to you I'm a faded Rose with a yesterday Let me tell you bout Rosebud's blues" Bridge: I held her hand for a long time She said "don't blame that son of mine Like his Daddy he never used his heart" I couldn't believe she could be so kind and in the closure I came apart Chorus: "Never new I had a grandson, These days I thought, it's over waitin for the final call to come waitin to whisper from the clover If you've come to hear my say come closer, I'll tell it to you I'm a faded Rose with a yesterday Let me tell you bout Rosebud's blues" The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice ethome...James |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Though I could imagine this being a country hit, I heard this actually as a rockier song that I knew if it got to rafio would be an airpower! (big hugggssssss) This is a powerfully told story, sweet friend, is it related on real experiences, this is powerfully poignant, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Eric Absolutely loved this Eric and I could almost hear the beat in my head. I hope all is well with you and yours. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ethome - you do write some really great songs,like this one... BC |
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