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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-03-15 04:42 PM

The sun rests upon the water
At the end of another day
Here we lie on golden sands
As the palm trees gently sway

The clouds are edged in gold
Soon the moon will be in view
As we lie here close together
In a hammock made for two

The warm Summer breeze
Brushes gently against our skin
As the next stage of love
Is about to begin

We'll celebrate our love
By the light of the moon
As our hearts join together
And play in perfect tune

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-03-15 04:48 PM

(smiles) I just love the beach so much and dream of living much of the rest of my life right beside it! (kiss on cheek) This is a gorgeous and balmy romantic poem, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-03-15 04:49 PM

This is relaxing...James

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

3 posted 2003-03-15 05:50 PM

Hi Sue, this poem has such a wondeful sense of calm about it. I love it. It gets my vote.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-03-15 05:53 PM

Beautiful...gets my vote!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2003-03-15 09:59 PM

Sue, this is the most beautiful picture and poem. I knew I didn't want to miss reading this.

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

6 posted 2003-03-15 10:01 PM

You definately show your love in this... He is a very lucky man.

~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one...
John Lennon

lost_star
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 114
NY, U.S.A

7 posted 2003-03-16 12:12 PM

The picture fits the poem perfectly, both very beautiful.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2003-03-16 10:04 AM

Mmmmm....once again I'm glad I paid Suetang a visit Good stuff.

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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2003-03-16 10:26 AM

LOVELY! I could feel the warm sands cradling my body with this poem.
Thanks Sue! Beautifully written, and relaxing.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

10 posted 2003-03-16 12:05 PM

Thank you for sharing warm sunny breezes. For now, I can only go there in my dreams ....

My son leaves for FL this afternoon, college spring break, yikes. He is so excited about being on the beach and who can blame him after the winter we've endured.

Huggles, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

11 posted 2003-03-16 12:08 PM

Sue - this is a memory for me - reminds of paradise (Kuaui- where I left my heart) thank you for reminding me that I have to go back and get it - xxoo

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2003-03-16 12:12 PM

OOOHHH, I love the beach, Sue..........So beautiful.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

13 posted 2003-03-16 12:56 PM

This makes me sooooo anxious
for my summer vacation!
Quite lovely, Suetang.

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

14 posted 2003-03-16 12:59 PM

I always wonder how you do it.....well, I'm clicking the vote box on this one...just beautiful!

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

15 posted 2003-03-16 03:28 PM

Wow that made ME want to be there. Sounds like paradise.
Great Read!

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

16 posted 2003-05-11 07:43 AM

The clouds are edged in gold
Soon the moon will be in view
As we lie here close together
In a hammock made for two

I love the whole effect of this poem... It allows one to visualise the whole scene, the setting sun, the hammock tied between 2 coconut trees...

Of course, your picture helped things along the way... heh

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Khryannalin
Junior Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 10
Winnipeg, MB, Canada

17 posted 2003-05-20 06:07 PM

Very lovely post, I'll be looking for other things from you. You have my vote to be put in the book

K

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

18 posted 2003-05-25 01:05 AM

had to read this again

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