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cheering for you... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Can you hear it The sound of my heart Beating within your mind Do you hear My tears Out side of your window pane Wanting to wash away All of your pain I know It's a bit absurd But I can feel it I know I don't know you Nor do you know me But still I don't like Sitting around helplessly Knowing that it shouldn't be this way For you... Isn't there atleast Something I can do? Isn't there atleast Something that I can say To let you know Honestly and truly That I'm cheering for you Behind the scenes Even though I don't know you And that you don't know me... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (03-15-2003 04:40 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
 big 's |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Very heart touching and compassionate. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
Beautifully descriptive, you sound like a really great friend! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
C - very nice write - a VERY good friend indeed . . . [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-16-2003 02:55 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I feel this way about MANY here. This is a sweetly sincere poem, and I enjoyed much. Hugs from a former cheerleader. |
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