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Spill My Soul
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Spill My Soul |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Spill my soul crisp cool stream runs deep steep as a mountain High as the clouds scream out loud: I AM HERE THIS IS ME FREE but caged aged young strung out on life strife Spill my soul it bleeds Can ya patch it please? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yanno? If one were able to patch his soul.....Mine would look like a crazy quilt. Nice, Sue "The shortest distance between two points is.....sometimes intolerable" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
needle and thread in hand |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Good write,can feel the anguish.I always figured the body and mind were confinment enough and the soul meant to bleed freely.Enjoyed...  Live like it's your last day... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
well I can't, but I know Who can. That caged and aged feeling is horrible, like you can't get anywhere and nothing is really relevant anymore. Sometimes healing is the hardest part, especially if the scabs keep opening again. Love this write ..you did it beautifully. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful. It means so much to me!  . It reminds me of my old poem, Being Free. Except your is better  . Great write!  Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...powerful and beautiful (plus soooo creative!) Eric |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ED - yours and mine both . . . Raph - you are so sweet to me - can you start threading that needle? xxoo bent - flow freely - yes - I guess thats why we are here . . . Alyssa - I know He can too . . . Connel - TY for such nice comments - I seriously doubt this was better . . . but is nice to hear Ericc - TY - always good to hear from you - creative - hmmm - like that Thank you everyone xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-15-2003 01:12 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice, I have the same feeling of caged.. Sandra |
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Amara Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 158East of the moon, west of the sun. |
*offers a needle and thread* I could try! I dunno if I should handle something so delicate, though. 'Spose I break the bars on your cage instead? Blessed Be Thee! - Stephanie Every heart has hidden treasures...a secret wish, a silent dream, and a cherished love. [Unknown] |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Sure! I'll toss you some thread of love and a needle of security to make you a blanket and set yourself free. "The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So good littlewing, I liked your first stanza especially. It was easy to get caught up in the stream and just go with the flow of your words. We're all a work in progress, unique in our own right (write) hugs~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
catalina - yes . . . dont we all though? Amara - hand over that chisel please . . . J.K - such a sweety - made me smile you did - very nice words Blues - unique - hehehe - thank you - always like to see you reading me xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
some say we have no soul. ... i have no use for capitals and commas, , i only know how to bleed my sioul [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-16-2003 07:48 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
and you do that very well here Michele- thank you xxoo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Perhaps if we feel to comfortable with ourself we would not consider the desires of our soul...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Well put James - TY |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
oops didnt mean this lol - but since I cant erase it - Ill just say thank you again lol [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-17-2003 04:43 PM).] |
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