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In the Depths of Denial
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In the Depths of Denial |
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Mollie963 Junior Member
since 2003-02-12
Posts 14 |
Cautious look down at my hands They feel your absent times Yours used to be right here Up until the day you changed your mind Silver seas of pain Burn through the accusing light Extinguishing your fading flame Take me deep into the lonley night Pained fingers pass over old memories Hesitate at your smile Trace the lines Can't see the face You've dropped your eyes To hide the lies I can't stand to face the trial I fall back so I won't have to hear The inevitable verdict I live the lie Under you Far below In the depths of denial Let be believe your still mine |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Sometimes we just refuse to let ourselves believe something, especially something so unpleasant. Well written Mollie.  Elizabeth It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah denial... the river in egypt...  seriously..a painful write and well done... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Understand this one in its entirety... M |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Mollie - this . . . just . . . aches . . . beautiful writing - xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-15-2003 12:06 AM).] |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
It's the absolute worst when the one we want isn't available to us. I completely und totally understand where you're coming from... ~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one... |
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