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Open Poetry #25

The winter breaths...

Etain
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 92
The moon...

0 posted 2003-03-13 07:37 PM

The winter breath,
in agony
decends toward
my bed
a hidden mystery
usurps abysmal thoughts
I close my eyes
to feel this breathing end
and merging into nostalgia
I step
into a distant real,
the winter is dying
into my arms
whitouth
any noise,
I feel his
last sigh...

Etain.

Stolen Simplicity
Junior Member

since 2002-11-07

Posts 22
Canadian

1 posted 2003-03-13 07:37 PM

I really liked it.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-03-13 09:40 PM

quite beautiful, bring on spring already though lol

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-03-13 09:56 PM

Wow...breath taking!
Eric

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