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Beyond the Shimmer |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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Strewn across an ocean's floor mesmerized by sparkled surface dance above me In ache to feel the pulse of sun match that within to draw life again into dusted lungs Save me from myself pull this corpse from wreckage breathe your pink warmth into cold blue flesh [This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-13-2003 04:24 PM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...this is so powerful. Eric |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A definite kiss of life required... Intense, Raph...but I expect that when I click in.... Thank you! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Save me from myself pull this corpse from wreckage breathe your pink warmth into cold blue flesh feeling inside feeling here.... enjoyed |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Ericc Sunshine and i expect warm and friendly responses from you..thank you always Cpat I really appreciate your reads and replies, thanks |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You really come up with some powerful writes.. This one is exquisite! Enjoyed the read. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Breath taking!!! WOW lucky indeed comes to mind! Lauren~ Here I am |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph - this is lovely - I was right there with you staring up . . . mesmerized by sparkled surface dance above me You will rise - as always just blowing me away with your words excellent xxoo |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
Intensity, it is the best way to fling words againt the mind. I love the freedom in your expression. Love, Etain. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
it honestly was breath taking...I was trying to come up with someone of my own...but it honestly just took my breath away... I always enjoy your writing... KS |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your work as always  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Enchantress thanks for the support and compliments as always Lauren thanks  Sue thanks angel, even a pisces can only take the water so long Etain i love that reponse thanks! Ks that's very sweet of you to say thank you very much Vandana thanks for the reads and replies as always |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Dark stuff, Aenimal! Core |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice raffi, somewhere out in the distance, but still there |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
yikes... nice! definitely intense! I like it Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Dark stuff, that's me Core Thanks mish yeah i'm hoping so thanks alyssa glad you did |
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