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Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2003-03-13 04:15 PM



Such a beautiful child with hair
as black as coal

Her eyes the color of dark amber

Her heart all alone never
knowing true affection

Who would ever know of
her tormented soul

A mother with an addiction
a father never known

She is a child of neglect
and loved without meaning

Her scars are never seen

© Copyright 2003 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
IcyFlamez89
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since 2003-02-14
Posts 292
Jersey City NJ
1 posted 2003-03-13 04:20 PM


Its very sad, :'(
Touching poem

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2003-03-13 04:34 PM


so many scars are never seen...

touching write...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-03-13 05:02 PM


And will those scars ever heal?
Probably not....Good write.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Learninginlife
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since 2003-03-13
Posts 9
Mississippi
4 posted 2003-03-17 03:41 PM


I know children like this in my job
seeing them is sad indeed
Beautiful poem though

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