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March Lace
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March Lace |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
These gatherings a last attempt In graceful lace of winter spent This silent fall of fluffy white Will seek its end upon daylight For this the final curtain call Of snowy dreams in last of fall And welcome now the new veneer As spring arrives to bathe with cheer For every fluffy flake drops three From icy chill to green topped tree Another season saunters in These glimpses of new growth again In showers of the last to know Reluctantly too warm to snow This silent time of calm rescinds To bring again the bold March winds Copyright Kkh 3/12/03 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful. We have new green leaves on the trees down here already. I love the spring. Beautiful write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I admire the way you rhyme your words without forcing them and leave the reader in thought. It is wonderful TD~ |
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Tristan Junior Member
since 2003-03-12
Posts 29 |
yeah your rhymes are good. i wrote an epic that should have been called captain obvious, it was so stupic because of how the rhyme scheme was. but yours is great |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
spring is not that far off but we're still under blankets of snow and sub-zero temp...a nice rhyming pattern here;squeeze: |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
interesting i don't think i've ever used 'veneer' for a rhyme spring any day now . . . okay by me |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely as always Kathleen... still a few flurriesover here after the 4 inches last night. I do hope it was winter's swan song though..lol. Hey..50 degrees this weekend!  ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kathleen, I was going to quote some of your phrases such as: "graceful lace of winter", but when I reread this each and every stanza is so beautifully written, I cannot, and it would do the entire poem, injustice to single out such. Just know how much I enjoyed this and how very lovely it is. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Nice. Much enjoyed. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kathleen - a'hhhh spring, time for romance, time to breath the last of old man winter as the new begins again... BC |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, it'll be good when Spring gets here in full bloom, won't it? I love the beautiful flowers blossoming. The azaleas and roses are always beautiful in this part of Florida.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
The snow has been here long enough, and so it bids us all farewell until next winter season. WE HOPE !!! Enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
VERY MUCH LOOKING FORWARD TO THE FINAL CURTAIN CALL TOO, GREAT WORDS AND OBSERVATINS OF THE CHANGING FO THE GUARD |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yay!!! Oh Kathleen, I love the spring more than any other time of year, my only demand is RAIN!!! We need it so badly out here in this desert! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I send easter lily hugs your way, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-14-2003 04:11 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great poem! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is flawess spring imagery. Loved it. Sandra |
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