Will You Marry Me? (repost from open #21)

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Open Poetry #25

Will You Marry Me? (repost from open #21)

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-03-12 11:01 PM

On this day a young man is gonna ask his girlfriend to marry him
He is out searching for the perfect ring
He already set up a dinner date

He goes into the jewelry shop
Looks at all the rings
Then after an hour
He spots the perfect one for her

As the time draws nearer
Nervousness sets in
His heart beats 100 beats a minute
He hopes that is the limit

Later that night they are at dinner
She can tell he is nervous
Then he gets down on one knee
She asks, "What are you doing?"
He says, "Asking you to marry me."

He opens the box with the ring in it
She stares at him and then the ring
Tears fill her eyes
As she says yes

Then he slips the ring on her finger
And says, "Soon we will be married. Together forever."

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-03-12 11:53 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Julie, I remember this and this is so beautiful, sweet friend, I dream someday I can win a womans heart and hear the church bells with her on a white morning in the future! (sigh) I can't wait for the day you and your love get married, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Tristan
Junior Member

since 2003-03-12

Posts 29

2 posted 2003-03-13 12:09 PM

This is very good. everyone's fantasy, so romantic

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2003-03-13 10:39 AM

Julie,

I do like how you take a simple 'moment in time' that we all experience or think about, and write a poem. This brings thoughts and memories and does make me smile.

Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

4 posted 2003-03-13 08:47 PM

I agree. Julie does that so well.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

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