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Filling the gaps
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Filling the gaps |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Whimpering towards the floor pleas absorbed back thru my feet regardless how high i hold my head you're choosing the death of us supporting your bones with thick skin dismissing your pushes taking them as punches kindly handing me back the gaps i filled wrecked in rage towards life blackening the holes that could be your way out of desolate my efforts branded unreliable and apparently so is my love. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ouch... well done... but ouch... nice imagery here...strong scenes painted in a few words that the reader may apply to fill in their own gaps |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
hugs  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
can be spinned many ways, but written from the gut, good stuff |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, I hope this isn't from personal experience. It really hurts. Hope you're okay? Heart Hugs  Ethel |
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