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Knock another one in
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Knock another one in |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Convicted by conscience heavy handed spilling the whys such a shame reaching the roof the flames rise sham of a fruitless existence so much time for thinking rational reasoning dies rattling blames nails knock another one in. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
an interesting write... not sure I know the intent of it at all.. but can take the words to represent different situations... I enjoyed |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sham of a fruitless existence so much time for thinking rational reasoning dies god gemma, these lines...wish I had written them..but then i wish neither of us had to write them at all |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
your really pounding it in here, ease up on yourself, good stuff, tho, really good |
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