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Laurenel Junior Member
since 2003-03-12
Posts 17Georgia, USA |
I hear the call of Death’s clear voice Bidding me to come I walk the path through forests dark A well trod trail indeed I hear the voices of the lost Who wander here and there Calling out their tortured pain Looking for help not there Yet still I walk through endless night Where living cannot follow I’m past the point where tears can fall Nor pain or harm or sorrow |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A very interesting first post Laurenel. Welcome to Passions. I look forward to reading more from you. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
It's easy to see you have walked through the valley of shadow. Welcome and good start I hope to read more of you. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) Oh Laurenel, this is a very heartfelt debut, sweet friend, sometimes we just have to make it on our own for it is the only way to grow stronger through the haunting feels we see and perceive, this is excellent, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Laurenel, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi Welcome to passions! Enjoyed your first post. Please chcck your email for a special greeting. Maree  |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I love your first post. I am a dark edged poet myself so I am drawn to thsi kind of verse. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Laurenel Junior Member
since 2003-03-12
Posts 17Georgia, USA |
Thank you so much for the greating everybody. I look forward to posting more. Please feel free to critique my work as well. Constructive criticism is the best way to improve.  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A very dark piece, but an all too familiar one for some. Welcome from  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
welcome to PIP.... hauntingly dark your offering... but nicely done. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Laurenel Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A sort of fearlessness here. Brave to walk not run. A strength of resolve. Welcome. |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
.Laurenel../\..very interesting, well-written poem; makes one pause and think.. ../\..Spiros -----------------calm--------- |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I can feel the numbness and obscurity... you seem to know it well. I like this. Look forwarding to reading more of yours, Welcome to the Blue Pages! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very beautiful first post. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. And,  Heart Hugs, Ethel...garysgirl |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Lauren - Welcome to PIP! What an excellent post - like the dark stuff and here you just spill your soul - very good xxoo |
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ShadowLost Junior Member
since 2001-06-23
Posts 43 |
Hi Welcome to Passions!!!!! I liked your first post....interesting!!!! Bridgette aka Justbleu ...and now these three things remain: faith, hope and love. But, the greatest of these is love. 1 Corinthians 13.13 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed your first post and look forward to reading more of your poetry! Warm welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Welcome to Passions! This is a wonderful debut piece. I look forward to reading more from you. |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
welcome aboard. nicely written. Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
excellent first post it felt like a memory as I read this welcome to PIP |
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