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Is Their Love Reality Or Fantasy
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Is Their Love Reality Or Fantasy |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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Whether it is in the still of night or in the sunlight bright They will always be together in reality and in their dreams whether fantasy or reality Even if the love they have for each other seems too good to be true It is true, it is reality No matter what others may think or say And it will be forever and a day because They have learned from their mistakes from heartaches of the past They have learned to love each other unconditionally To not try to change the other to be someone they are not They have learned that they should love each other just as they are Themselves And if they will continue to do this they will be together always in their dreams and their fantasies and in all their realities For forever and a day Always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 what a piece! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...Interesting...I have some writings on reality that I will be posting someday soon I hope...I think for a love to be a reality it begins with a friendship that is a reality and progresses from there...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Ethel, this is so gorgeous, sweet friend, this brought tears to my eyes because I want to be loved just like this and on Valentines Day I couldn't help but cry because I've lost Joanna as my valentine and I had no one and I want to hold a girls hand and make her feel special and help hug her from her past tears and regrets! (sad sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, You got that right. Good read enjoyed. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
your romance is showing... enjoyed this .. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - whatever others say, true love is true. Very nice... BC |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh Ethel, this is just precious! Enjoyed greatly. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Always, all ways.... Enjoyed this, Ethel... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Learning from past mistakes lest they be repeated! Loving another as one should love one's own self! I "love" how you write on "love"... Warm hugs, Linda |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
I like how it goes long, to small, then opne word... Cool. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ethel, very nice i really liked it always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
A love story told with beauty and poetry. Thanks, Eric |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
 clapping: Couldnt have said it better myself!!! Love your work always |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The best of both...enjoyed Ethel. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write as usual Ethel...much enjoyed. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dixie  . James . Noah . Seymour . Capt. Ron . . WOW, I didn't expect to get this many replies on this one. I thank each of you so much, and appreciate ya'll, too..... . Love and Hugs to you all, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill . Pat . Lady In White . Linda . Connell . . Ya'll are all so sweet for reading and replying to my poem. I appreciate all of you very much and thank each of you. . . With love and hugs to you all, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Carol . Eric . Albert . Duncan . Nancy Lee . I really meant what I said above...I honestly didn't think I would get this many replies on this one, but I'm so glad all of you read it and replied to it. I appreciate all of you so much. I thank each and every one of you. . . Hugs and love to you all, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-18-2003 02:59 AM).] |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I loved this poem, Ethel. True love is supposed to last forever (or, "forever and a day"), but usually our selfishness muddles it up. Ah, if only we could learn... But I am learning, if ever so slowly. Blessings, El Campeador “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Benjamin... I think so, too...and now I'm finally learning, too... Ethel |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
let's hope it does endure with time |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michele, yes we hope and pray that it will endure......and we are also doing everything in our power to help each other to realize the depths of our love for each other. We both honestly believe that our love will endure for always. . . Thank you for your concern.... Hugs from Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-18-2003 03:17 PM).] |
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