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Open Poetry #25

Burning.

DarkSide_Blues
Junior Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 41
Fl, Usa.

0 posted 2003-03-11 12:57 PM

Burning.

Deadly are mine eyes a blazing,
Hazing lost in sorrow,
Soulless life is dually fading,
Shall be no longer, come the morrow.

Hollow is that tainted soul,
Thine mind a sheltered fire,
Dreadful be that bleakened hole,
Such brilliant fire, lost in ire.

Whom hath painted my creation,
Painter such a sullen man,
Lined thine path with obligation,
Gave a soul, when you need a hand.

~DarkSide Blues.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-03-11 05:22 PM

I really liked the feel of this one

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-03-12 03:19 AM

Stephen - nice writing - liked your reference to your creator - as if in you are the canvass - nicely done xxoo

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-03-12 11:01 AM

wont let this piece fall

DarkSide_Blues
Junior Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 41
Fl, Usa.

4 posted 2003-03-12 10:13 PM

Thank ya'll very much! ^_^

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