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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-03-11 07:00 AM

as the wind comes rushing by
hear its serenading chimes,

feel my love,

touch upon you,
taken by surprise,
not to analyze,

feel my love,

in the kiss,
upon your cheek,
it blows,

feel my love,

without beginning or end,
timeless as the source
from which it flows,

feel my love

in the wind's song
passing by,
it sings for you,
freely,

feel my love,

always there,

it comes
to you,

as is...........

unconditional

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-12-2003 10:03 PM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2003-03-11 07:17 AM

A very beautiful tune of Spring ... love wants to be felt!
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-03-11 07:20 AM

Sweet words of love...James

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2003-03-11 03:17 PM

In the wind
there is so much
to feel.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-03-11 03:35 PM

Beautiful!
Eric

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2003-03-12 01:01 AM

feel my love,

touch upon you,
taken by surprise,
not to analyze,

There you go!
Like the wind, love will play the chimes on it's own!

(when it's good and ready)

Nice going girlie!!!!

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

6 posted 2003-03-12 01:15 AM

This is a wondrous offering of warmth to the receiver...lucky soul. KJ

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-03-12 01:22 AM

This is lovely Michele - just what I needed tonight - made me feel nice - you are so versatile in your writing - liked this much xxoo

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

8 posted 2003-03-12 08:21 AM

Can I put it to music and make lots of moolah!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-03-12 08:30 AM

Michele, you have to have true love in your heart to write about it so well. This is a very good description of it. I enjoyed reading it.

Hugs,
Ethel

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2003-03-12 10:57 AM

inkedgoddess - you sing a love song very well...

BC

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-03-12 11:32 AM

This reminds me of an old song that my mom used to listen too. lol. good write

!

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

12 posted 2003-03-12 08:27 PM

unconditional love

theres no greater love.
nice one michelle.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

13 posted 2003-03-12 08:32 PM

needed this much thanks

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2003-03-12 09:13 PM

enjoy your read

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

15 posted 2003-03-13 11:43 AM

Michele,

I like this a great deal. Yes, I believe your love is written on the wind for any who take a moment to feel it. Unconditionally, that is you!!!

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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