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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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treetops erased by white, swirling lights, shaking sky, shattered mirrors, colors released from above, melt in crystal ice, diamond studded leaves of grass, the virgin in white, i stand, alone, in dark, the very first time, everything pauses, all paths meet at centerpoint, i am nothing i am everything, no more,no less than a mere drop of ice, peaceful quiet timeless night, a reflection of myself, invisible [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-17-2003 09:18 AM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love it. This is a truly heartfelt piece. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Now, Michele, you could never be invisible!!!! LOL  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Thank you, Eric |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Michele, This is really pretty. It is odd what we choose to project to the world when often there is that peaceful, quiet, timeless beauty within. All who learn to know you, know that about you. Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
sounds almost like an old jefferson airplane/starship song. very cool. -majnu |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for the dig up, california dreamer, but duh? im blank, please im a fan of the ballin bunch, but which song? where? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Liking the cool clarity I read here. Nice, Michele Ed |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
colors released from above, melt in crystal ice, diamond studded leaves of grass, the virgin in white ******************************************** A very visual write. I enjoyed it greatly. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
awesome words mishy |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
BEAUTIFUL! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wow!! Poured down the page like a waterfall. Such grace, such vision. Like the author. Smiles from ThisDiamond [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (03-06-2003 08:16 PM).] |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Ones vision may be anothers dream. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I don't know how I missed this! It's one of your best Michele~ How cool is the invisible ice cube analogy! very! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is amazing - it just sings . . . excellent inked xxoo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
so smooth, calm and knowing. inked, ya are a very visibe poet godess! learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - I don't think you're invisible, I can see your photo... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like it! lots! |
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