Open Poetry #25 |
I Feel So Lost |
Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
I feel lost, not knowing where to go. Walking in circles, thinking I know. Thinking hard and wondering why. Why is my life so differ? Sometimes I wanna cry. I wish I were back, as a young boy. Always running around, so full of joy. I love my parents, and I don't mean what I say. Just that I feel lost, and don't know my way I can't see my reasons, for being mad. I miss the fun times, we all had. Them times have changed, and so have I. I can't promise to be happy, but I shall try. I think I found my way, and I'm not lost. And I will change, no matter what the cost. --- ( Old end ) --- Ill try to change, and be a fun guy. Someone happy, that's no lie. Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! [This message has been edited by Connel (03-10-2003 07:53 PM).] |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Connel, I COMPLETELY understand your thoughts, and can appreciate them. It takes mucho work, however the happiness is there if you search hard enough. I wish you great success in your search. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
The way your emotions flow is great. Great write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
In the moment you begin to question, the answers will come. Ah, the longing for the times when we were happy with little things ..... just cultivate the child within, it will show the way. Enjoyed your poem! Margherita |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Ringo - Thanks, It has actually been getting better within the last few days. The Loner - Yeah, The way people can allow their emotions to flow out into their words. A diffacult thing to do. But, after time its easy. ( Wish I could get it down. lol ) Margherita - Well, I dont think that the minute you question answers pop up. I think itle take SOME time before I find out how I can become happy, And I alreasy found one. And thats being here with all my friends at PIP. Thanks guys, for all the nice replies! Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
I just updated it now.. I changed the end.. The end was kinda weak. So made it better! Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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DarkSide_Blues Junior Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 41Fl, Usa. |
Sup, My magical monkey friend! Another good one, with strong feelings behind it. I know everyone feels this way at one point in there life. Time is the largest *radio edit* bandaid in the world though. ^_^ \V/ Good job. Ja ne. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I like the new ending the best. Sometimes we all need to look for direction and find our way. Good work, Connel, I'm glad to see that you found yours. Elizabeth It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got... |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
It's a journey we all take with questions we all ask and a reminder to seize the day. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can relate well...you are not alone... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I think we all feel that way sometimes. Nice job! Deb |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Thanks guys.. Oh, and stephen, quit calling me your magical monkey friend . its just a bit disterbing. Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I know how you feel. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Connel - Your thoughts I've known, best to you... BC |
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Silver_Tryst Member
since 2003-03-10
Posts 64MT |
I Love it, i can relate to being lost... nice job Shayne |
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