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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-03-10 05:20 PM

Dreaming
my heart longs to some forgotten song
that play silent to
the night -

In the morning...I hum this faint, familure tune
that lingers on the edge
of what I know...and what I have forgotten.

Yet still...somewhere...the song plays on.

And still my heart...longing...lingers
on the edge.

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

1 posted 2003-03-10 05:56 PM

In between two precious worlds... one blending into the next, and left with the song of the divine world you long for... that world within.

This is a beautiful write.

Thank you...

Love,
Moca

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-03-10 05:57 PM

And in the morning
the first sunbeams
capture the reminiscences
of this secret tune
and dance to it playfully
on your cheeks,
the light reaches
into the heart where
all the lost treasures
just wait to surface,
for all to see
through the sun
mirrored in your eyes.

Yes, the song plays on, in your beautiful words.

Love, Margherita

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-03-10 05:59 PM

So beautiful. ( Im so speechless

)

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-03-11 03:05 AM

Ericc - so sweet - so utterly sweet - xxoo

sellout007
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 108
Suburbs of Chicago, IL

5 posted 2003-03-11 03:24 AM

Very nicely done!!

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-03-11 06:52 AM

Ericc...lovely!

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

7 posted 2003-03-11 01:09 PM

Sounds very familiar. This dream I have had more than once.

Deb

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-03-14 07:42 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Eric, this is so very haunting, sweet friend, I know this feeling too and I wish for the soothing acoustics to again light up the jaded tune in your heart! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2003-03-15 03:48 PM

Enjoyed...james

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

10 posted 2003-03-15 07:05 PM

"Dreaming
my heart longs to some forgotten song
that play silent to
the night -"

a few of us KNOW that song...
your poetry is breath taking...h

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