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Plain Jane?
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Plain Jane? |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) 
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She says she is plain an everyday ordinary girl nothing much to look at unless you see the reflection of her soul I beg to differ from the flesh to deep within she has beauty untold Venus features satin skin and a heart of gold She is the day and the night the sun and starlight the best of both worlds to me and all who she knows Her energy entwines all who are near She is not an ordinary girl but an Extraordinary beyond a persons dreams only modest it seems |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
some people don't see how special they truly are... and it is noce when someone does see that in them.. I am sure she will enjoy this.. nicely done... |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Nobody is ever like they appear. good piece |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so romantic. I love it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Great poem showing once again that beauty is where you find it. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Thomas, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yes, true beauty is on the inside and I think many fail to recognize that! (big hugggsssssss) You are beautiful, everyone is beautiful, and there is no shame in admitting it, God Bless You, you have my beauty vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Great tribute to what is real. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It doesn't get any better than this! Loved the polish and simple elegance~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...nice description |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
This seems to me to be something every girl would love to hear about themselves.. how special.  This is so beautiful.Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
You each understood my meaning and my feelings in them thank you Thomas |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder..it's nice to read a poem about someone who SEES beyond the exterior and looks at a beautiful heart. Lovely!!! |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, you sure seem to behold her as beautiful.  Elizabeth It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got... |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
I wish I would meet a girl as you described some day.  Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! [This message has been edited by Connel (03-12-2003 09:11 PM).] |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
it really is to bad that we can't see ourselves the way other people see us. Great write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautifully done! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I know this person, and thank you for this, will show it to her. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If only more looked for a beauty beyond the obvious. *S* I like this very much! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
How wonderful that you love the book---and the cover! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I knew that girl, dated her even though the guys made guy remarks....And when I ran into her ten years later, wow! were those guys ever wrong...... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A wonderful write. I see nothing of the rogue in this piece.  |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
All rogues have a tender side we just don't admit it. LOL |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thomas, she may think the way I do when my Love writes and tells me things like this.... I tell him all the time that love is blind. But, don't ever quit writing or telling her these sweet things, because we just love to keep hearing them. Oh, and I think she will love to see this one in the book, too....so,  (me going to vote) "Love makes the world go around" ~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-19-2003 12:24 PM).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
A person who sees what is there to be seen, and knows what he sees is good. Well done. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Came back to vote because this is that good and a pleasure to read over again and again. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
My vote for you ... who sees such beauty and tells us graciously; true modesty is extremely fascinating. Love, Margherita |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Each one of you that has made a comment to me on this poem only adds to what I have written so thank you each and every one of you  Whiterose I am a Rogue though Just a Romantic one |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
This is an insightful write and i thoroughly enjoyed and happily voted. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
bump |
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