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Open Poetry #25

Abandoned Place

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2003-03-10 07:28 AM

Do you hear the voices whisper,
On winds searching for space,
A crack or crevasse where to enter,
And spin the dust in place,
A light touching with the winter,
Freezing the tears in place.
Do you see where there is no light;
Wax pool where it was spent
In attempt to keep back the night,
After the daylight went,
In the darkness she ran in fright
To where voices have sent.
Do you hear them whisperings,
Listen as the sadness springs.

Gloom

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-03-10 09:18 AM

Professor,
Good quality gloom, enjoyed.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-03-10 10:19 AM

waiting
for the daylight
to lengthen the waking
have you noticed time is stretching
in pause

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

3 posted 2003-03-10 10:28 AM

Thank you, Seymour,
Glad you enjoyed

Thank you, Nakdthoughts,
Yes, I do notice the loss of the darkness to the light
The greater days, and even the slightness of warming.

Gloom

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-03-10 12:22 PM

wonderful! I like this series...will there be more?

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-03-10 01:56 PM

Oh, my, yes...
Thank you, Professor...

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