Open Poetry #25 |
Beer 2 |
rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
Beer 2 sorry, this is my second poem about beer in as many days, I'm just pumped up for spring break. I take a sip..... Thus begins our magical trip. I have only one; you and I both know I'm hardly done. As I begin number two I'm really starting to enjoy you. As I reach for three; our love must be! On the fourth, I head outside, just by myself; needing to further damage my health. I need some nicotine - if you smoke, you know what I mean. Heading back inside, continuing on our magical ride. While I was out, I gagged I choked, just because I have to smoke. I had number five..... continuing on our ride. I had number seis, all of it's gone, without a trace. Let's skip seven, eight and nine, all of them were simply divine. On to ten and then eleven, if I drink more will I see heaven? 12 answers that question, no turning back, no second guessing. Beer, you always teach me a lesson. The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love another. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep...I know |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
it's a good lesson though, never anything harmful |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
rk lol - and yes I do smoke - made me smile twice today - well not about the health risks of smoking and drinking but that Krusty head up there lol xxoo |
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DarkSide_Blues Junior Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 41Fl, Usa. |
Again, for some reason, the Beer poem cracks me up...Not because of the actual poem, or the meaning behind it though! Those, I actually enjoy. It's just for some reason, when reading that poem there, it just reminded me of "Mr. Toads Wild Ride" o_o. Weird right? lol |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Have fun in the sun and be careful for goodness sake, Might be a good idea to leave your keys where you can't find em!! |
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