One More Night - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #25

One More Night

Stapleton13
Junior Member

since 2002-08-06

Posts 13
Windsor, Ontario Canada

0 posted 2003-03-09 10:08 PM

How do I listen
to the words, not
spoken out loud!

How do I live
without the comfort
of your arms.

How can I survive one
more night without you
being by my side.

How long will you
wait till you feel,
my love for you?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-03-09 10:12 PM

Hi Kathi! So good to see you posting again!
This is a heart-wrenching write..so full of longing.
Very well expressed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-03-09 10:22 PM

Very powerful words. Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-03-10 01:59 AM

the longing here is intense!

Chrissypooh
Member

since 2002-02-19

Posts 80
Canada

4 posted 2003-03-15 06:00 PM

Beautiful write, thanks for sharing....

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.