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How The Time Flies
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How The Time Flies |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
This poem really means something to me, and I wrote it from my heart. This poem, for just some reason, has a lot of meaning to me. I wrote it this afternoon. And I really hope that this means the same to you as it does to me. Life goes by, Without warning. You notice you hit 50, One morning. I seen it happen, And pray it dont happen to me. Oh I don't want to die young, Is all I plea. I wanna grow old, And live happy with loved ones. With someone who loves me, Tons and tons. I hope I'll have a happy life, With much family and friends. At least until, My life ends. Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Connel - with a heart like that I am sure you will have much happiness long after eternity - nicely done xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) That's why Sammy Hager sings you can't drive 55, you got to walk off the highway and look around and enjoy the blessings around you as there is so much love to share and behold! (big hugggssssss) I agree with you, this is a very special poem because it reflects the loving soul you are, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love this heartsong of yours. Love life, love yourself and share love and LIVE IN THE NOW to the fullest .....that's the secret of a fulfilled life. I think no one is totally "immune" to a certain melancholy regarding the quick passing of life and you have expressed it beautifully. Love, Margherita |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is such a well written poem, thanks for sharing  |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
For all for whom this poem resounds Every decade brings new bounds But you have captured many cares The passing of time always scares. Nicely done and written with heart. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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DarkSide_Blues Junior Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 41Fl, Usa. |
Very nice my magical monkey friend. o_o You've been getting progressively better since the first works i've read of yours. o_O Keep up the work! w00t. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Connel, Self expression of true feelings. You captured well how many feel, I think. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Darkside, that comming form you means a lot to me. Conidering your poetry, is beond great! Thanks man. And thanks to the rest of you all too! these comments mean a lot to me.  Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. [This message has been edited by Connel (03-09-2003 06:19 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
You know, I really liked that. I feel the same way sometimes. the Wind is invisible. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well said and much enjoyed! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching...thank you |
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DarkSide_Blues Junior Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 41Fl, Usa. |
Tee hee. o_O Libary. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Connel...I know what you mean, having a close call with death can be a real eye opener and allows us to embrace life each day knowing that we could be gone in a second...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Connel - this writing you have done also means someting to me. Very touching... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Connel, I liked this. It was a very touching poem to me.. "Love makes the world go around" |
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