Open Poetry #25 |
Nature |
KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Snow capped mountains Flat Farmland Expanding Blue Skies Deep Valleys Rolling Hills Each State so different But so the same All busy people hurrying through life striving through one goal to get through the day Forgetting to look at the beauty around them Mumbling and grumbling living in discontent If they just took one minute to look Stars painted on black canvas Making pictures of creation Solitude surrenduring peace |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Lovely, peaceful and wise. Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely thoughts and images here. ~Hugs & a vote~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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sperarifraai Member
since 2003-03-06
Posts 65Ireland |
Execellent, A very clever and fascinating ryhming pattern Sperari |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kristie, this is so very sad but true, sweet friend, I feel we will only find peace and love in this world if we can disregard the commerical world and slip back into the pastoral lifestyle where beauty is all around us and appreciate the simple pleasures and blessings! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this has my sunflower vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are so right. There is so much beauty to be enjoyed and it is FREE, creation's gift. Beautiful. Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kristie - this is just gorgeous - realized this the other day - had to learn it from my three year old - TY - xxoo |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is nice...everyone needs this reminder!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Thanks you guys! I wrote that on the way home from Washington State a few years ago. I was in the Greyhound....Amazing what you see when you sit back and observe.... Glad y'all enjoyed it... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Great poem Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! a beautiful write lady! *click* |
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