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something old I found.. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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31 Dec 00 I'll offer you my soul For your friendship in return I'll even hand you the key If you can help me to understand My unfolding destiny I'll even accept your friendship laced kiss If you can keep all of my wishes a secret I'll even clean up the mess that clutters my heart So you can have a place to sit And fall asleep When all is not well I'll be your haven, if you'll be mine I would even cradle you in my heart For a lifetime Never letting you fall And I will always come running Whenever you call If only you cushion my heart as well When you see it beginning to fall And come running whenever I call... Don't know if this sounds good or not but I found it when I was going thru some old journals and stuff..early spring cleaning I guess *shrugs* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (03-08-2003 09:38 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ceinwyn - reads and sounds good to me... BC |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
You may not know if it's good or not, but- trust me- it is... Very well put. I have the very same relationship with a friend of mine, and you put it into words better than I ever could. Thank you |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Very nice.. Thankya so much for sharing this beautiful peace.  Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ceinwyn...an early write? What promise you showed even then...because you see, my friend, this is the heart of poetry...it is real, and honest... thank you! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
C - this is amazing! In my head you are this evening - excellent - pure heart xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I think it's really good! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Kris this is touching hope you find that person soon |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
beautiful poem and I love the message |
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